Mary DeDanan
CatchWord Writing Studio
Cazadero, California
Work: 707 632 6362
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Even the smartest people can have trouble putting themselves onto paper. You need an expert on your side.

I’m an independent editor and writing coach who works with creative writers of all kinds. With decades of experience, I offer rich practical skills to help every writer. Contact me for a free one-hour consultation and no-obligation estimate.

(hint: depends on what you need)

• Restructure, rethink, and hone your material with a Developmental Edit.
• Tighten and trim prose with a Line Edit to clarify meaning, maintain internal consistency, cast out clichés, rein in jargon, and diversify overused phrases.
• Correct grammar, usage, spelling, and punctuation with a Copy Edit.
• Polish a finished manuscript until it gleams.
• Strategic Coaching is the gentle, compassionate kick in the butt you need to manage procrastination, blocks, and avoidance, rewire your habits, and finally get it written!

• Strengthen characterizations, plot, internal logic, narrative flow, and hooks.
• Make your scenes and dialogue sizzle with energy and momentum.
• Sharpen your story with an eye to the marketplace: agents, publishers, and audience.

~ I have a gift for helping authors develop novels, memoirs, stage plays, and reportage. I've spent years working deeply with the gears and guts of creative writing. My advice is warm, specific, and exceedingly useful as I strive to bring out your unique voice.

~ I work across genres -- literary, historical, fantasy, magical realism, science fiction, mystery, comedy, romance, and young adult -- because good stories are everywhere.

~ Nonfiction affinities include green/off-grid living, alternative building, gardening, nature and wilderness, environmental issues, travel, health, spirituality, music, and theater.


Every life needs a mission. Mine has been to immerse myself in the creation, artistry, mechanics, and business of language. I’ve freelanced as a book copyeditor and proofreader with Random House, UC Press, Harcourt Brace Jovanovich (deceased), Stanford Press, and Jossey-Bass. I’ve worked in professional theater as a literary manager and dramaturg (Magic Theatre, Z Space, La Jolla Playhouse), and published arts journalism and reviews (Pacific Sun, American Theatre, Wired, Callboard). I’ve been a working journalist. I've been a magazine and newsletter copyeditor. I’ve been an advertising copywriter and copyeditor with both hard-line corporations and world-changing nonprofits. I've written content for complex web sites. Through hard-scrabble critique workshops, I earned a B.A. in creative writing/literature from UCSD (summa cum laude). I've extended that knowledge through many courses at The Loft, UCLA Extension Writers Program, and writers' conferences. I’ve published award-winning articles, essays, and short stories, and have in progress a novel myself. Yes, I write too, so I know the struggles and thrills firsthand.

Please see my web site -- -- for more details and testimonials.

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